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I am working on my own clue suspects, inspired by the patent suspects. I am gonna start a story based on the regular suspects with a few new ones I made up. The first one is Miss Peach's elderly mother. In my story idea, Peach is the long-lost niece of Sir Hugh Black. Her mother, was Sir Hugh's other sister, not Magaret Black Boddy (Mr. Boddy's mom), but an older sister. Her name is Coral and she is bedridden (or so we think) and has a Nurse. So I give you my version of Aunt Coral (in the style of the CMD cards).
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Love it! Where did you get the picture?
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Thanks alwayspeacock. I did a search on google and edited a random picture I found there.

Here is the next new character I made. It is based on the character of Captain Celeste of the Chilean Version of Clue.

Meet the pilot of Mr. Boddy's private jet, Captain Welkin Sky:


Welkin defined (from dictionary.com)

wel·kin n. Archaic 1. The vault of heaven; the sky. 2. The upper air.
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One more before work.

This character's name I got from the Clue Puzzle Series.

Madam Chartreuse is a Native American clairvoyant who works with Madam Rose. She follows Rose to Boddy's with a message of impending doom.
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they are all really cool and interesting!

the captain reminds me of an actor, which i cant put my finger on... :?
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Here's the character based on the patent character of Nurse White. Since Mrs. White will be a main player in my story idea, I went ahead and changed Aunt Coral's nurses name. Here is the nurse known for her very *ahem* "personal" bedside manner, ask anyone of her satisfied male patients.

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Wow! I love these. I always liked the idea of new suspects with different colours; and creating their own cards (but I don't have the artisitic ability).

These are excelent!

Welcome back too :)

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Here's a bit of a teaser poster of my story idea that I am currently working on. It will be more than a story...but for now here's something to pique your interest.

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Woah! Excellent!

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I like the new suspects! Will you be making any more?
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Still workin on storyline and character development...

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Well guys, I am still working on original characters. The characters will be similiar to the characters in the movie that get killed. They won't be main characters, but they will play key parts to the development of the story.

I am posting all the cards I have made for the new characters I created. My idea is a continuing drama, a soap opera like idea, that will be on a web site that will be updated regularly. It will unfold on a weekly basis (i hope). So far it will take place over a number of years, althoug I may change this to a more real-time format before the launch. That's all I wanna mention right now cuz my idea changes virtually every day. So here are the minor characters that will be expendible. They will get killed, arressted, or just be around long enough to develop the story and then be gone.

I also wanted your help on more character ideas. If anyone is willing to help come up with some ideas for other characters, that would help me make this more of an interactive project. You guys always have great ideas. To help I will make another thread and give you some information on developing a character for me to incorporate into the story.

Meet the supporting players in my Clue story:
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I love the cards and I love your idea. I will look forward to reading it!

I'll definitely submit a character or two. :)

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I've already submitted a character.
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I'm glad their is a Jewish suspect, Mrs. Silver.
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How do you come to that conclusion?
How do you know what kind of pictures they are if you're such a lay-dee?

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Silver is a very common name among jewish people, along with many other variations like Silverstone, Silverstein, and Silverman. Goldman, levine, Stein, and Zimmer are examples of other common Jewish last names.
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I should know. I am Jewish. :mrgreen:
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I got the name of Mrs. Silver from the patent suspects.

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Webpage protoype layout is complete! Nothing works on it as of yet. And I am still in the process of writing the first "Episode" of my online story.

Take a peak...

http://members.cox.net/depboyjr/Clue.htm

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