The Airship Murder

[CluedoKid]

I like the latest board design best. The colours and positioning are striking, and gone is that strange irregular shape that didn't sit well.

[TheWhitePawn]

Thanks Cluedokid. I think it's my favorite too.

[Murder by Death]

Very nice. I love the graceful arc you've introduced into this design. But I definitely like the original as well. Not sure which is my favorite.

I only have one comment before you send this to press: is there truly not some better use for that small room on an Airship than a "Storage Closet"?

[TheWhitePawn]

I thought about it. And I figured it should be a room frequented by Mrs. White in addition to the Kitchen. Mrs. White will be the cook on board.

Besides, there needs to be a space for all the linens, silverware, frozen food, etc.

[Murder by Death]

Besides, there needs to be a space for all the linens, silverware, frozen food, etc.

Ah. Maybe "Pantry" would provide better ambience? It would then service the c o c ktail lounge, promenade, and Bridge as well, perhaps where the drink orders are prepared too? Just a thought.

[TheWhitePawn]

Oooh, I like that. "Pantry" also wouldn't require 2 lines. I'll have to change it.

[Murder by Death]

Is the printer you are using local, or is it an online company that does one-off gameboards?

I'm sure you'll reveal all, but how will the rooms on the board relate to the rooms on the cards, other than name?

[TheWhitePawn]

I updated the board with the new name.

but how will the rooms on the board relate to the rooms on the cards, other than name?

I don't understand. Relate in what way? The name is all that matters.

[CluedoKid]

So long as were suggesting name changes, wouldn't 'Galley' invoke the vehicle theme better than 'Kitchen'?

[TheWhitePawn]

So long as were suggesting name changes, wouldn't 'Galley' invoke the vehicle theme better than 'Kitchen'?

I thought about that one even when I created my first Airship Murder, but the term was not used on airships as much as naval ships.

As for the box cover, I created a first concept.



As far as the invitation, I have the whole thing created and it will be pictured on the front of the rule book... similar to the 50th Anniversary letter.

[cacums]

I really like it!

[TheWhitePawn]

Thanks

[CluedoKid]

I think it's nice, but for the rule book.

I find covers more successful if the murder theme is conveyed. I love how you did the Midnight Murder box with Boddy and the candlestick's silhouette.

[TheWhitePawn]

That's true, but I think I'll keep this box nonetheless.

I am, however, thinking of adding a little phrase though I think it may detract from its elegant simplicity.

[WarnerPlum]

It's good! Congratulations!!

[Mr. Sterling Silver]

The soft glowing lights emanating from the windows of the airship on the game board are a very nice touch -- really sleek and elegant.

[Michael]

Truly is a work of art! But the one thing that irks me is that the pantry is opposite the kitchen. I can't fathom a rational reason that it would be so far away from the kitchen.

[TheWhitePawn]

Well, remember that it was originally called a storage closet. It has a lot more than just food.

And it's really not that far away. Remember that this is an airship and not a giant mansion anymore, so perspective is a little different too.

[TheWhitePawn]

Here is the second box concept.

[cacums]

Is that Mr. Boddy?