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i found out i could link my website throught my profile

im sure you all knew that, but thats where the link is

enjoy ....

i hope


unfortunately I do not have any solid chapters up, but I am making great progress on my first one: Banrgrashan Holiday - which focuses on the disapperance of Mr. & Mrs. Boddy. But I am sure that you will find yourselves surprised on which characters come into play in this segment. I will be sure to post when I have it up on the site.
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Very cool! I can't wait to read them!

My first thought, when the main page image opened, was "why is the detective holding a banana?" LOL...

If I might make a suggestion, it could be catchy if you made all of the story titles names or derivatives of TV shows. That's where I thought you were going at first with Family Ties, then Law and Disorder. It could be fun and a great gimick to keep your readers guessing as to what the next one would be!!
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a bannana?!
i gotta see that one!!
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It's actually a pocketwatch... But as the picture was loading and it scrolled down, it looked just like a banana.
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you took all the fun out of it!
thanks alot! :D
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Sorry... I just sensed way too much enthusiasm on your part and feared that I built it up too much! I was saving you from disappointment, really.
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Post by boddysattorney »

pocket watch? that this is HUGE

chapter one is up, by the way

and i am trying to try and make alternate names to classic movies and tv shows

ie ... Banrgrahan Holiday: Roman Holiday (after all, Princess Audrey Hepburn ran off in that move, just like the Boddys)
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Michael wrote:Sorry... I just sensed way too much enthusiasm on your part and feared that I built it up too much! I was saving you from disappointment, really.

no-no it's cool!!!
i am just in a completely nutty mood!
thanks for saving me there!! :D
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I love the first chapter! Very well written and intrueging.

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Post by Michael »

Yes, what an interesting take! Nice unique characters and settings and such. I can't wait to read your take on the mansion.

Am I the only one, however, that was hoping for a masacre at the beginning of the scene? I was just waiting for the little boy to be either kidnapped or he and his uncle killed somehow in some brutal fashion. :twisted:
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murder is always a good thing!!
that just sounds way too wrong!
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It just felt to me that they were walking into a trap! It would have been good DRAMA!
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suspense,.....i need to go check that out!
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that little boy just happened to be Mr. Boddy and that uncle was Judge Black ... neither of them could be killed yet ....

but those were the royal Azures
you can be sure that a violent political revolution will happen in time
that you can be assured of
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can't wait to read now!!! :D :D :D :D
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Chpt 2 is up
(i used a former set-up i had, but just tweeked it a little)
it's not as long ... but definetly more violent and obviously more important
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Yay to Clue Stories!

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i have decided to stop the Tudor Mansion Files
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That's too bad, the world needs quality clue fanfiction!

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i think you have the world fit out well enough
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